The Diner by jessypt

Title : The Diner

Author : jessypt

Rated : M

Chapters : 26

Status : Complete

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Bella is a baker with a rough past, looking for a new start. Edward is a chef trying to get his life back on track. What happens when things heat up in the kitchen at The Diner?

Review :

This fic is simply classic. With all the simple angst, I said simple because recently the form of angst is getTing heavier day by day, seriously. It’s about Bella who tried to runaway from her crazy ex-husband (or so she thought). She cameback to Forks, her hometown and lived with Charlie. Bella loves to bake and that’s what she does when she got a job at the local diner, The Diner. Besides waitressing, she made cupcakes. The only problem is the chef. Yes, Edward the chef. He is so grumpy about his kitchen, even Bella has to take his grumpiness. So as Edward and Bella slowly become closer, they learn about each other and deeply care. They both know that each other has issues but afraid to push it. When the storm really comes to their relationship, Edward and Bella realize that they have to handle their issues first if they want to move on in their relationship.

Yes, simply sweet and hot. Yes it has angst but I’m sure it’s not a big deal. It’s classic and well written. This story has been waiting patiently in my to-be-read list for almost two years lol. By the way, this ChefWard is hot and sexy and he can cook. Isn't it amazing ? Imagine waking up in the morning with the breakfast ready, must be heaven :))

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5709380/1/The-Diner

Cutlass by TKegl

Title : Cutlass

Author : TKegl

Rated : M

Chapters : 26

Status : Complete

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Isabella Swan is certain notorious pirate, Edward Cullen, murdered her father and stole his prized cutlass. Out for revenge, she sneaks onto his ship, but Captain Cullen claims she has the wrong man. A tale of the search for truth…and treasure of course.

Review : 

Cutlass is one of my favorite fic. The story is about Bella who’s trying to take a revenge to One Eyed Eddie for the death of her father. Little did she know anything about her father. So when Bella join Edward as his crew in “The Arrow”, she has to pretend as a boy. When the chance comes, Bella fails to fulfill her wish and she ends up to reveal her identity as a girl. But Edward takes no prisoner, he knows the truth about Bella’s father. So both Edward and Bella share a history to revenge to the same man that make their life misery. A prite is not a pirate if not in a treasure hunting. So the only way they can revenge is beat that man in treasure hunting. Of course, Bella and Edward need to work as a team and it’s not easy. Because both are stubborn and secretly attracted to each other :D This story is beautifully well written. The words made me enjoy reading it, follow the journey to the treasure. Not too lemony, so when Edward kiss Bella, it really is something big :D Beautiful fic, amazing story with amazing ending. Read it :) 

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7792629/1/Cutlass

An Undefined Affair by jayhawkbb

Tittle : An Undefined Affair

Author : jayhawkbb

Rated : M

Status : Complete

Chapters : 27

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Bella, recovering from a broken heart, meets Edward, who isolates himself emotionally. Their attraction is immediate, but can they be friends and lovers - without the love? BxE, all the regs, some drama, some funny, lemony, language AH

Review :

The story begins when Bella, representating her workplace in a client meeting with the one and only Edward. Their first encounter is very interesting, funny and unexpected. A meeting in the office is not enough for both of them, so the “work meeting” continues in a bar and they ended up in Bella’s place. One thing lead to another. Bella doesn’t want a relationship, neither does Edward. They both want no string attached. So there they go, spend their times together, every chance they got, every night, in a work circumstances, there’s nothing impossible for them. Jasper and Emmett, Bella’s boss and bestfriends, remind her about her issue about commitment. At first Bella still can manage her heart, but when she feels her feeling grew more than just a friend, she decides to tell Edward. Edward also afraid of commitment, so when Bella just drop the L-bomb, he reacts so badly. He just doesn’t realize yet that he also love her.

Before you read the hot hot lemon, you must survive the prologue first J

One word for this fic : AMAZING. It’s hot, it’s a little bit angsty, it’s drama, it’s sexy and it’s kinda funny and super wellwritten. Hot, because Edward can give 13 orgasms to Bella just in 12 hours. Oh yes I’m becoming too vulgar here LOL. Bella character in this story is so fun, easy going and smart. I like it. Edward is also smart and hot. Jasper, I love him here, he’s so protective of Bella.

So, if you interested, click the link and read. I love this fic so much. Oh and one more thing, to accompany reading the story, you can listen to the song “Fixing A Broken Heart”. Really it suits the story, like Edward and Bella were made for each other, to heal the broken heart from the past.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6009627/1/An-Undefined-Affair

Fatty by kitkat681

Title : Fatty

Author : kitkat681

Rated : M

Chapter : 33

Status : Completed

Pairing : E/B

Summary:

Edward Cullen can't find something that's very important to him...his wang. But that's what happens when you are 363 pounds. Bella Swan is his only chance to live a real life and find what's missing and so much more.

Review :

Edward is fat and he wants to get in shape. He's tired of the joke on him. So he came to the gym and got help from personal trainer, Bella. At first, Edward really underestimated himself but Bella didn't let it happen. Bella sees Edward more than just throuh the scale. Within months, Edward shows progress, so does the progress of his feeling toward Bella. He can't deny that she has captured his heart. Edward also realized that Bella is the motivation so far.

Seems like easy fic, but truly this story is so deep. It tells about insecurities that happen to most of people who's not sexy, not slim, not in average shape, not fit in (like Bella said). This story teaches us that happiness is in the heart. In this story, Bella didn't come sexy, she was indeed fat once. She felt those insecurities. Even at the moment she got the shape she craved, she still feels that. So does Edward.

All those heavy stuff unfolded in a humor words, easy and well written. Love this fic. So beautiful.

The quote I like : 

I may always be a fatty.

But I'm happy, healthy and surrounded by people I love. 

And in the end…that's all that matters.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7698232/1/Fatty

With The Lights Out by cherry.blossomz

Judul : With The Lights Out
Author : cherry.blossomz
Rated : M
Bab : 31
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"What if the choice you made is wrong? Isabella falls into a charmed life as the new bride of Carlisle Cullen. When she meets his unpredictable heir and nephew, Edward, she is forced to question who she is, what she wants, and the life she has chosen."
This story is so hurtful, I don't know but that's what I was feeling when I read it until the end. Given the circumstances in the fandom, eventhough this fic already completed before that. I learn something from the story though, that cheating is hurting anyone you know, whatever the reason is. It's complicated enough to complicate your already complicated life. But in this story, Bella's life is not that complicated. She just wanted to be loved. Yes Carlisle, Bella's husband, loved her so much, but his works took most of his time and then Edward came as Carlisle's nephew (Yes Carlisle's age is twice Bella's). The feeling is not instant in Bella's side. Edward is trying the hardest to respect his uncle's wife but they can not hold the attraction any longer. So the affair begins.
It's an easy angst story but I found myself so captivated with the words. It is so beautifully well written. Despite the cheating, you should give it a shot and read it. This is too good to be missed. Beside, the lemon is hot, both Carlisle and Edward. Gah! I still can't believe I read lemon between Bella and Carlisle, but I guarantee you won't realize it until they finished it LOL. HEA for Bella and Edward :) But please underline and bold my words, I do not agree with cheating, this is a hurtful story but yet the lemon is hot and so beautifully well written. Reading this, it feels like you ripped your heart out and turned on at the same time.
Oh and if you decide to read this, one night is enough ;) and once again this is just a fiction.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6865875/1/
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Practice to Deceive by Livie79

Judul : Practice to Deceive
Author : Livie79
Rated : M
Bab : 28
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"I saw her today. I wasn't impressed. But he wanted her, and that was enough for me. She was just collateral damage."
This fic is about Edward, who just love Bella but started it with a wrong way. Edward made Bella as a target for his revenge to his bestfriend, Jacob. Edward thought Bella as Jacob's new girlfriend. But he's wrong. Bella is not that easy. When first they met, Edward, cocky and confident, tried to make Bella fall for him. Bella didn't buy crap, so Edward tried harder but Bella never give her full attention. It's a long way that they are finally together and Edward still keep his original intention toward Bella. Edward realizes he already change that intention but he never got the courage to tell Bella. And all break lose when Bella finds out.
This story is so good. Not too lemony but the storyline itself can give the goodies no less. Edward here is hot and Bella is fiesty. So the sexual tension is fun. Edward wrote a journal, there's a reason for it, and that's the problem comes from.
I love this fic and it's HEA :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7699988/1/

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Dear Veronica by cosmogirl7481

Judul : Dear Veronica
Author : cosmogirl7481
Rated : M
Bab : 41
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"1994 was the year that The Cranberries lingered on our radios and Jordan Catalano was still the hottest boy we could imagine. But it was also the year that Bella Swan decided to keep a diary. A record of her actions. A place to share her thoughts."
So, Bella named her diary Veronica. She shared everything, her twin brother Emmett, her daily activities, in school and the diner where she works, how her feelings day by day, including her crush, Edward. Bella wanted to date him, but Emmett and her father, Charlie, didn't like the idea. Bella just wanted to be normal just like any other highschool girl, but apparently she had to be smart to get what she wants. Maybe break one rule or two.
This story is so beautiful, well written as always from cosmo. A very sappy and beautiful happy ending, this fic reminds me of my old times diary. I don't think teenage girls right now have one. The setting is 1994, it's quite a long time ago but I can still imagine the fashion style that cosmo described in this story. Oh and this fic gave me something to listen to everynight before go to sleep, it's Mazzy Star's song "Fade Into You". It's a beautiful song :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8183892/1/
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Shamrocks and Shenanigans by mathisson

Judul : Shamrocks and Shenanigans
Author : mathisson
Rated : M
Bab: 30
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review:
"Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good."
Mostly told from Bella's point of view, this story is about mob world. Bella, a good girl, working in an event organizer, never realized that anyone surrounds her is involved in mafia world. First, her sister, then her father who happen to be the chief of police. When Bella is working in one of the most expensive wedding ever (in her mind), she met Edward. Bella doesn't know how powerful Edward is, and one thing she doesn't understand, he called her Legs.
Phew..what should I write? LOL this fic has it all, the lemon, the drama, the romance and a bit of fluff, even violence, drug use and crime things. If you like mobWard, you will love this story. :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7965930/1/
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Penal Code by BellaFlan

Judul : Penal Code
Author : BellaFlan
Rated : M
Bab : 10
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"Undercover Cop Edward Cullen wants some excitement on his beat. Bella, whom he mistakenly thinks is a hooker, desperately needs to snap out of her funk. How deep is Edward willing to go undercover to get the girl?"
Edward is an undercover cop. One night, he really really wants to catch a hooker. So there he is, trying to "make a deal" with a hooker ( or he thought look like a hooker ). Only he doesn't know, that Bella (supposed-to-be-a-hooker) is one important person in his office. Things get more awkward when Alice comes in as Bella's bestfriend and Edward's sister. Also when Bella's father found out about this situation. Edward has nothing to do to save his job and life, except his love for Bella.
LOL such a hopeless romantic, but Edward is, hopeless and romantic, stupid but brave, fortunately he is a handsome cop. Bella is one brave woman, very cool and doesn't take anyman's bullshit easily, including Edward.
A collaboration of BellaFlan and FictionFreak95, this fic has a funny story, hot lemon and pudding. I don't know why they choose pudding, but because of this story, I never look at pudding the same again LOL :D

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7706072/1/
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Catch My Breath by tanglingshadows

Judul : Catch My Breath
Author : tanglingshadows
Rated : M
Bab : 11
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Once upon a time, a quirky woman barreled into a soft-spoken man's life and turned it upside down. Not that he complained about it...
Edward is a cop. A good and nice cop. But he can't deny the attraction between him and Bella. After one time at night, Edward can't get Bella out of his mind. He feels rejected but loved at the same time. He wants to date Bella but has no idea how. Bella is 8 younger that him and she is his boss's daughter. Yes, that's the problem. But Bella doesn't see it as a problem :D
This story is short but all fun. I enjoyed every chapter. A cute happy ending. Love it!

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8227043/1/

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