Showing posts with label complete. Show all posts
Showing posts with label complete. Show all posts

Thursday, March 14, 2013

By Your Leave by jonesn353402


Title: By Your Leave
Author: jonesn353402
Rated: M
Chapter: 22
Status: Complete

Summary:
Honorably discharged Sergeant Major Edward Cullen meets widow Bella Black and her young son Seth. The ad says room for rent, but maybe they have more to offer each other than just space.

Review:
Really like the story. It's actually quite simple and very drama. Edward and Bella attracted to each other, but before they move to the next step, they have to let go memories and hurt in the past. Lovely and well written.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8436114/1/By-Your-Leave

Friday, March 8, 2013

Masen Rules by CaraNo

Title: Masen Rules
Author: CaraNo
Rated: M
Chapters:50
Status: Complete

Summary:
Sometimes rules do more harm than good. Sometimes they're meant to be broken. Bella takes a risk and sets out to break the most important rule of them all. Well, it's the most important one to the Masens.

Review:
A very intense story, about Bella who's trying to reconnect her husband, Edward, with his father, Edward Senior. It's not easy, because both are the same stubborn and keep the rules. But Bella has to find some ways to bend the rules, just so they get back together again. TattWard, ChefWard, he's not actually a chef but has the cooking skill. Juicy lemon, dangerous place, various style (what am I talking about? LOL). In the end, it's a very good story.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8898860/1/Masen-Rules

Thursday, March 7, 2013

It Begins Like This by iambeagle

Title: It Begins Like This
Author: iambeagle
Rated: M
Chapters: 20
Status: Complete

Summary:
A story about long- distance love. It begins with 'Then' and ends with 'Now'.

Review:
A very lovely story, fluffy with a good portion. Beautiful and well written. Love it.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7895489/1/It-Begins-Like-This

In Your Room by LayAtHomeMom

Title: In Your Room
Author: LayAtHomeMom
Rated: M
Chapters: 23
Status: Complete

Summary:
After years of bedroom boredom with Missionary Mike, can Bella find the sexual salvation she's seeking in the arms of campus hottie, Edward Cullen? Rated M for Edward's dirty mouth, Bella's inner whore, embarrassing situations and lemons galore…

Review:
Wow, what a smutty fic! Bella can be so dirty with dirty fantasy, what a dirty girl, LOL, and Edward is more than happy to make her dreams come true. Oouuw, what a college times, fun times!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8664104/1/In-Your-Room

Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Departures by TheFicChick


Title: Departures
Author: TheFicChick
Rated: M
Chapters: 10
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B
Genre: Romance

Summary:
"Every day for the rest of my life, I will wonder how kissing a virtual stranger goodbye could have felt like a hello."

Review:
This story once was my favorite oneshot. Imagine how happy I was when TheFicChick decided to make it as multichapter story. Wow.
The story begins in O'Hare Airport, when Bella's flight is delayed because the weather is bad. She meets an Army Edward in the waiting room. Introduction been made, from Pearl Jam to pancake, to smoothies, to borrowed Army sweatshirt and it all leads to exchange kiss and email address.
I fell in love with this Edward. In chapter 1, you can know straight that he is a sweet and cute man. Cute? Hmm maybe because the lack of romantical relationship that he admitted to Bella when he first met her. Sweet because he loves his niece. And what I love the most in chapter 1 is how it ended. So beautiful and romantic. Then comes the next chapters, occupied with Bella and Edward words in their email banter.
So sweet and beautiful story. I enjoy it very much :)

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8625604/1/Departures

Monday, January 7, 2013

The Demons in My Dreams by littlecat358

 Title: The Demons in My Dreams
Author: littlecat358
Rated: M
Chapters: 33
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B
Genre: Hurt/Comfort, Drama

Summary:
27 y.o. social worker Bella Swan has seen her fair share of troubled souls, but nothing like Edward Cullen, part owner & manager of The Cullen House Group Home. Will he allow her into his life? And can she survive the demons that haunt him? OOC.

Review:
This story is about Bella and Edward, both are madly in love. But it's not easy love, they both have package to think about and issues to deal with. Edward has a group home for boys and Bella has two kids under her watch taking placement there. The first couple of weeks of their meetings were not pleasant. It tooks more than home visits and emergency calls before they open up to each other.
It is very adult theme, adult conversation. I love how Edward and Bella solve a problem. Together they match perfectly. Like one when they have to find a way out to Emmett's and Rosalie's problem. I like it.
Good story, really really good. Love it.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6942309/1/The-Demons-in-My-Dreams

Dusty by YellowBella


Title: Dusty
Author: YellowBella
Rated: M
Chapters: 38
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B

Summary:
She loves him. He loves her crazy. She's a hopeless romantic. He's just hopeless. She's afraid to let go. He won't let her. A story about a silly girl in love with a foolish boy. Here, forever is a lie. TeamBella23 - the realist and YellowGlue - the poet

Review:
Dusty...ohhh Dusty...you rip my heart open, tear it apart and put them back together like nothing. Reading this fic was like riding a rollercoaster. It's up and down. Angst level 10. I have no idea how I survive it.
I can't even write the proper review. It's just that good to play with your emotion. Okay I'm trying *sigh*
The story begins when a fifth-grader Bella is the new girl in Forks. She meets Alice and her brother Edward. Since then, they're always together. When they hit puberty, teenager Bella and Edward can't deny their needs, but they can't be seen together. Edward grows up become a trouble. He needs Bella, but he has other needs too. Bella needs Edward, but she understands.
Ohmygod, this is complicated. But I love it. This Bella has strawberry blonde hair and she's very girly, way too girlier than Alice. That's one of the reason Edward falls in love with Bella.
Please read it yourself if you haven't got the chance to read it when it's still in WIP status. Read it and prove it that it's so so good :))
It's well written, don't question it!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7659651/1/

Saturday, December 15, 2012

Symmetry by aftrnoondlight

Title: Symmetry
Author: aftrnoondlight
Rated: M
Chapters: 11
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B

Summary:
Love comes slowly when it's the truest. A modern day romance designed and told by Edward.

Review:
Working with your brother's bestfriends shouldn't be awkward, right? But it is if your brother's bestfriend is acting protective and has tendency to ruin your date. Yup, Edward, has a feeling for his bestfriend's sister, Bella. Bella doesn't know or she's acting like it but she's sure she knows her feeling to Edward.
What a fun ride. I'm a little bit shocked reading rotring word in this fic LOL reminds me of my old time. This Bella is carefree and independent, typical of engineering girl *smirk* Good story, good lemon (what a lemon, gah!!!).

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8429963/1/Symmetry

Oh Brother by RobzBeanie

Title: Oh Brother
Author: RobzBeanie
Rated: M
Chapters: 26
Status: Completed
Pairing: E/B

Summary:
Shy, orphaned Edward comes to live with his older brother and his wife to finish out his last year of high school, bringing with him a seven-year crush on his sister-in-law. AU, AH ** TASTE OF THE FORBIDDEN CONTEST WINNER - Honorable Mention Judges Vote and Judges Favorite from SoapyMayhem **

Review:
Oh brother...in law..you are hot! Yes, Bella couldn't help herself when Edward, his 18 years old baby brother in law confessed his needs and attraction to her. Her marriage with Jasper is not that bad, they're trying to get pregnant for the last two years and no such luck. Bella is craving sex for fun not just a duty to have a baby. So yeah, opportunity comes and unfortunately Jasper knows in the worst way. From here, Bella's life becomes a hell. She pays the price of cheating, she lost friends, husband, a place she used to live. In the otherhand, Edward cannot stop loving Bella. He is willing to wait for her.
Okay, the story is so unique and different. There are some issues in this story, like age difference that Bella finds it so hard to accept. 11 years older than Edward is big issue for her. Then also infertility issue. I have a soft spot for her in this. When Jasper tells Bella that he and his new girlfriend are expecting a baby, Bella's world is crushing down. She believes that all of this time, is her fault the reason they can't pregnant. But with Edward, who knows? It's really not easy, full of effort and everyday babymaking doesn't much help.
I can't say I'm team Bella or team Edward in this story. What I love is both Bella and Edward learn from the action they did, they live the guilty feeling and they move on. They pay the price, they work on it, and get what they want. This story is more realistic with the issues, how Bella deals with her own hell. I enjoy reading it. It's a happy ending, of course :) Good story.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8507899/1/Oh-Brother

Do Over by TKegl


Title: Do Over
Author: TKegl
Rated: M
Chapters: 19
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B

Summary:
Every Christmas Eve, Edward Cullen sits in a bar and regrets the decision he made ten years earlier that tore Bella from him. But when he gets a second chance to right that wrong, it's not quite what he expected.

Review:
A beautiful and amazing story from TKegl. It's like a movie but reading it will give a new experience. This story is about second change. Desperate Edward is spending his Christmas Eve in a bar, planning to get drunk. A beautiful woman, Tanya, is approaching and trying to get to know him (I love this Tanya). Edward tells his strory, about the Cristmas party he's avoiding rightnow, because in that party there's someone he loves so much. His feeling doesn't change even after 10 years apart. He was supposed to propose her, Bella.
He is desperate. But apparently fate has its own way to show mercy on him. Edward has been given the chance to fix a mistake in his past. Edward has to use the opportunity smart and wisely. To do over, a chance to be with Bella.
Oohh I love this fic. The story is amazing. Well written and happy ending. This Edward is not perfect, whatever he done is wrong in Bella's eyes. Edward learns his mistakes. Bella too. A very mature theme, I'm not only talking about the sex but the main story itself is so adult. I love it. A very good story and it suits the occasion, Christmas :))

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6579540/1/Do-Over

Wednesday, November 21, 2012

Lions Eat Lambs by Raggdoll of Twilight


Title: Lions Eat Lambs
Author: Raggdoll of Twilight
Rated: M
Chapters: 9
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B

Summary:
A camping expedition goes awry when Bella's friends disappear. While searching for them, she stumbles upon the manor of Edward Cullen, unaware that she is about to become a pawn in his dangerous game - a game she can't afford to lose.

Review:
This is one scary story, like really really scary, blood, etc. Bella is one brave girl, searching out for her missing friends. And when she stumble upon a manor of Edward Cullen, she can't deny the attraction toward the owner of the house. But something is definitely off. Edward Cullen claims himself as not a human but a vampire. He wants Bella's blood. Bella wants nothing but to find an escape for herself and her friends.
It's scary enough for me. This Edward has no mercy and i dont have any idea if he has love in his heart. This is how a vampire should be in my imagination. Dark, mysterious and makes you want to run down the hill. In this case, Bella really really runs down the hill.
It's a good story and well written ;)

Rise by Rochelle Allison

Title: Rise
Author: Rochelle Allison
Rated: M
Chapters: 26
Status: Complete
Cast: E/B

Summary:
Bella is a bad boy's girl, living a life she no longer wants. She's trapped, until one of the things that keeps her confined - her bodyguard - becomes the very thing that could set her free.

Review:
No it's not a cheating fic, the author confirmed it to me. Although there's cheating thing happened in the fic, LOL. Bella, is the girlfriend of a badboy, Alec. She's been with him for so long until she can't feel the love anymore. Alec's behaviour has changed and sometimes violent to Bella. Bella felt empty, but one thing that keep her alive, it's her bodyguard, Masen. Alec hired him to take care of Bella, because Alec is so busy in his business. And take care of Bella that Masen does. They both know the price that should be paid if, it's their life.
Okay, so this story is not like I imagine in the first 10 chapters. It is more than that. Eventhough not too lemony, but when it gets to that part, it's BAMM hit you hard and hot! Masen is hot. There's some drugs dealing in this story but it's not the main concern here. It's more to Bella. How Bella survives through the mess, how she imagines to escape, leaving Alec alone.
Good story, well written and HEA :))


Friday, November 16, 2012

Letters to Corporal Masen by solostintwilight

Title: Letters to Corporal Masen
Author: solostintwilight
Rated : M
Chapters : 37
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary:
Writing to offer a bit of home to a soldier overseas, she discovers words can bind a friendship. Lonely in war torn Europe, he finds hope in letters from a stranger. What happens when the war is over?

Review:
Letters to Corporal Masen *le sigh* This is the most romantic twi-fic story I read. Bella found her true love through letters. She found Edward, a duty soldier during World War II. They correspondent for months. Between letters, they got to know each other and developed a feeling, a mutual feeling. Bella found the reason that she was important and had meaning to someone else, once a completely stranger. Edward found a reason to come home, Bella, his angel.
Bella had faith in Edward, so did he. It's so romantic, I don't even know what to write here because it's so romantic and beautiful and sweet, gahh...! Edward here is so romantic, I believe the men in that era were all romantic (imagining Pearl Harbor movie). My heart is taken, with Corporal Masen *happy sigh*
Oh and this fic is so well written and HEA of course ;) This story has become my favorite completed multichap fanfic of the month :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8467119/1/

Thursday, November 1, 2012

Que Sera, Sera by Livie79


Title : Que Sera, Sera
Author : Livie79
Rated : M
Chapters : 13
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary :
Isabella's life was nothing more than a series of unfortunate events since the day she was born. For her, monsters are real, love is the fantasy, and fate is a cruel mistress. The future's not ours, to see...what will be, will be. 

Review :
Swan family is a bit strange of family. Everyone in town knew that but not everyone knows what exactly happen inside the house. Bella becomes the object of her parent's anger. She took the blame of her twin brother's death. Her parents are so abusive and violent, her big sister, Alice, is no help. Alice is just happy because she's not being the victim anymore. So it tooks everything in her to keep Bella in place. Including watching her in school. Bella, who falls in love to her partner in class, Edward, has to hide her feelings to everyone. But she can't keep it long enough before her family knows and her nightmare just becomes reality.
It's a scary fic. Good story with a unique happy ending, it took a rollercoaster way, screaming and tears even pulling your hair or fist your hand. Really, i did those things. It's crazy. It's like a movie. Well written, of course. 13 days to complete this story, 13 chapters total, what a lucky 13, right ?

Indecent Proposal by pattyrose


Title : Indecent Proposal
Author : pattyrose
Rated : M
Chapters : 30
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary : 
Edward's heart was broken by the girl he's loved for almost a decade. Drifter Bella wanders into Forks aimlessly one hot summer day. When their paths cross, he proposes a scheme to get them both their deepest desires. But things aren't always as they seem & Fate can have other plans.

Review :
Edward's world is not the same again when he walks for the first time in to his examine room. Bella, his first patient takes over his life, his soul and his bleeding heart over Bree, his longtime girlfriend, now ex. He always plans everything, but with Bella, he just acts. Yes, it was stupid to propose a woman he barely knew to become his girlfriend just to make his ex, Bree, jealous. And now Edward has to pay the price. His heart, because Edward can't deny that he is in love with Bella.
Love love love this fic. Bella is super energic, carefree and brave. She's also smart and independent. Everyone loves Bella, only Edward who took longer time to realize that :) Edward, a very serious doctor, very stiff, a planner. He never understand how Bella survives with just travelling and how Bella is so carefree, never plan on anything. With Bella, he feels the love he never felt, he lives the world, he enjoys life. His only nightmare is Bella disappear suddenly.
Once again, I love this fic, from my favorite author, please mark her in your author alert, her stories are awesome :) It's well written and of course HEA, and only in this fic I hate a character named Bree so much, lol.

Playing It Straight by MissWinkles

Title : Playing It Straight
Author : MissWinkles
Rated : M
Chapters : 29
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary :
Sometimes love is all about telling the truth. AH, OOC and very, very fluffy. Written for the Twilight Twenty-Five Round Six.

Review :
This story is funny and ridiculous. Bella needs a roomate, Edward is looking for one. They meet and they deal so Bella moves in. What she knows is Edward has a lover named Sam, but she doesn't know that Edward is no longer comfortable doing Long Distance Relationship with Sam, that his heart has fallen to his new roomate.
Awww, really, this story is cute and funny. So easy, no heavy stuff. Do you think Edward is gay in this story ? Find it yourself ;)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8029022/1/Playing-It-Straight

Wednesday, October 31, 2012

A Form of Escapism by flubbles


Title : A Form of Escapism
Author : flubbles
Rated : M
Chapters : 35
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary :
Bella finds herself trapped in a loveless marriage, whilst going through the motions of everyday life. Her only form of escapism is the romance novels written by the recently retired, reclusive author E.A.M Cullen.

Review :
It's all started when E.A.M. Cullen, Bella's favorite author, moved in to the house right next to Bella. She just wanted to give a cake as a welcoming gift, turns out they become attached to each other. This interraction doesn't miss in James, Bella's husband. James is very violent to Bella, very controlling and always taking, not giving. E.A.M. Cullen or Edward noticed that there's something wrong going on in Bella's marriage, he offers comfort and safety to Bella but James doesn't give up easily.
So, this Bella is a very dutiful wife. She does the chores, serves her husband, does as she told. Edward always give her courage to stand up on her own, but Bella believes that James hold all her cards in life. Poor Bella. 
Anyway, I never like or agree about cheating that's why i'd say that this story is dangerous because cheating in any form is dangerous. I've followed this story since two years ago, it's very well written, beautiful with the BritishWard and HEA, of course :)

Sunday, October 21, 2012

Through The Flames by SparklingTwilight


Title : Through The Flames
Author : Sparkling Twilight
Rated : M
Chapters : 41
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary :
One fateful night, 29y/o Edward must make the decision that haunts every firefighter's worst nightmares. In choosing between his life and that of another, life altering repercussions arise. Rated M. Contains graphic descriptions of fire

Review :
This fic is very deep and classy. Very good, of course and well written. The story is not about love between two different person, it's not only about Edaward and Bella. It's about the family. How Edward used to be the golden boy but he is indeed perfect (actually I'm in love with this Edward if he's real). Edward used to care his two younger brothers, Emmett and Jasper. Edward used to be someone to rely on in his family. Everyone expects the best of him, his co-workers, his parents, his brother. And when the big fire happen (he is a firefighter) Edward has to save a life from a young woman, that's when the accident's happen. He's almost losing his life but he saved Bella Swan's life. As a gratitude, Bella choose to be beside of Edward, taking care of him eventhough at that time Edward still in unconsious condition and Bella herself  has breathing issues.
Edward and his pride, of course it's hard for him to accept his real physical condition. Sometimes, Bella's presence doesn't help. It's so heartbreaking and frustrating. Tissue warning. A lot.
I love it, i love this fic so much. It's so sweet, so meaningful :))

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5883476/1/Through-the-Flames

Saturday, October 20, 2012

Close Your Eyes by CaraNo


Title : Close Your Eyes
Author : CaraNo
Rated : M
Chapters : 28
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B

Summary : 
Bella barely remembers her godparents, but after losing her mom and dad, she's shipped off to rainy Washington to live with the Cullens for her final semester in high school. On the outside, the Cullens are perfect. Behind closed doors is another matter.

Review :
I love this fic. Love love love. It's perfect. It has emotional part that I love, it has emotional part that I hate. This Edward is not perfect. He's only trying to be perfect just for his father, Carlisle. At school, he's popular, everyone afraid of him, he is the rule. But when in home, he's just a boy who must obey his father. At his house, Carlisle is the rule. So when Edward meets Bella, he doesn't know that she is truly his savior. Bella is not the shy girl. In this story, she is brave and won't take any bullshit from man.
Actually, what happen inside the house ? Cara wrote it beautifully well written. Don't hold back if you feel the need to scream or cry because that's exactly what i feel. The lemon ? Don't ask, it's hot and sexy. 
And when the storm finally over, there comes the DaddyWard. Even sexier with the kid. It's so sweet and amazing. This story owns me.

Captive by Totteacher

Title : Captive
Author : Totteacher
Rated : M
Chapters : 33
Status : Complete
Pairing : E/B


Summary :

Bella is kidnapped only to find herself in an unground Empire of Vampires. Her only chance to survive is to be chosen by the Dark Prince as his offerring, submiting herself to an unknown future against her will, the only other option is death.

Review :
This is one good vamp-fic I've ever read. The words in the story scream vampire, especially at couples of first chapters. Really, it's so well written that I don't realize i finish it. It's so detail, I like the part when Edward, the Dark Prince, ackowledge his mate's presence, which is Bella. He is so affectionate and over protective but so romantic and very gentle to Bella.
Good, well written and hot :D