Dusty by YellowBella

Title: Dusty
Author: YellowBella
Rated: M
Chapters: 38
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B

Summary:

She loves him. He loves her crazy. She's a hopeless romantic. He's just hopeless. She's afraid to let go. He won't let her. A story about a silly girl in love with a foolish boy. Here, forever is a lie. TeamBella23 - the realist and YellowGlue - the poet

Review:

Dusty...ohhh Dusty...you rip my heart open, tear it apart and put them back together like nothing. Reading this fic was like riding a rollercoaster. It's up and down. Angst level 10. I have no idea how I survive it.

I can't even write the proper review. It's just that good to play with your emotion. Okay I'm trying *sigh*

The story begins when a fifth-grader Bella is the new girl in Forks. She meets Alice and her brother Edward. Since then, they're always together. When they hit puberty, teenager Bella and Edward can't deny their needs, but they can't be seen together. Edward grows up become a trouble. He needs Bella, but he has other needs too. Bella needs Edward, but she understands.

Ohmygod, this is complicated. But I love it. This Bella has strawberry blonde hair and she's very girly, way too girlier than Alice. That's one of the reason Edward falls in love with Bella.

Please read it yourself if you haven't got the chance to read it when it's still in WIP status. Read it and prove it that it's so so good :))

It's well written, don't question it!

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7659651/1/

My Beautiful Storm by troublefollows1017

Title: My Beautiful Storm
Author: troublefollows1017
Rated: M
Chapters: 20
Status: Complete
Pairing: E/B

Summary:

Weather-obsessed Bella finds Edward's journal, leading her on a trip down memory lane. Back then, Edward had run away, hoping to find a new purpose. Bella couldn't wait for her chance to escape, sure she knew what she wanted. Neither one expected this.

Review:

The story begins with Bella who reads Edward's journal that brings her to the memories from the first time they meet. They met in a summer break in their senior year of highschool. With Edward's past that still a mistery, Bella make a friendship with him. From friendship became love and within time they learned each other speciality. Yes, Bella is obsessed with weather, whenever she's nervous, she would talk about the weather. And Edward didn't find it funny or stupid. So did Bella, she looked at Edward's speciality as a gift. Together they spend the rest of senior year in love. But not all things went smoothly of course. There's Edward's past and family that became an issue in Edward's internal life. Because Edward and Bella were so clueless in love department, they needed help from their cousin, popular couple Emmett and Rose.

This is a sweet unique and beautiful story. Really really beautiful. I don't know if someone like Bella does exist in reality, but maybe, who knows? And someone like Edward? Maybe. He made a symphony for Bella to express his undying love. What a grand gesture (Bella's words). But they are really really a cute couple. Cute story. Love it :))

Well written and HEA. I looooove the ending so much.

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7601746/1/My-Beautiful-Storm

Que Sera, Sera by Livie79

Title : Que Sera, Sera

Author : Livie79

Rated : M

Chapters : 13

Status : Complete

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Isabella's life was nothing more than a series of unfortunate events since the day she was born. For her, monsters are real, love is the fantasy, and fate is a cruel mistress. The future's not ours, to see...what will be, will be. 

Review :

Swan family is a bit strange of family. Everyone in town knew that but not everyone knows what exactly happen inside the house. Bella becomes the object of her parent's anger. She took the blame of her twin brother's death. Her parents are so abusive and violent, her big sister, Alice, is no help. Alice is just happy because she's not being the victim anymore. So it tooks everything in her to keep Bella in place. Including watching her in school. Bella, who falls in love to her partner in class, Edward, has to hide her feelings to everyone. But she can't keep it long enough before her family knows and her nightmare just becomes reality.

It's a scary fic. Good story with a unique happy ending, it took a rollercoaster way, screaming and tears even pulling your hair or fist your hand. Really, i did those things. It's crazy. It's like a movie. Well written, of course. 13 days to complete this story, 13 chapters total, what a lucky 13, right ?

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8623804/1/Que-Sera-Sera

Close Your Eyes by CaraNo

Title : Close Your Eyes

Author : CaraNo

Rated : M

Chapters : 28

Status : Complete

Pairing : E/B

Summary : 

Bella barely remembers her godparents, but after losing her mom and dad, she's shipped off to rainy Washington to live with the Cullens for her final semester in high school. On the outside, the Cullens are perfect. Behind closed doors is another matter.

Review :

I love this fic. Love love love. It's perfect. It has emotional part that I love, it has emotional part that I hate. This Edward is not perfect. He's only trying to be perfect just for his father, Carlisle. At school, he's popular, everyone afraid of him, he is the rule. But when in home, he's just a boy who must obey his father. At his house, Carlisle is the rule. So when Edward meets Bella, he doesn't know that she is truly his savior. Bella is not the shy girl. In this story, she is brave and won't take any bullshit from man.

Actually, what happen inside the house ? Cara wrote it beautifully well written. Don't hold back if you feel the need to scream or cry because that's exactly what i feel. The lemon ? Don't ask, it's hot and sexy. 

And when the storm finally over, there comes the DaddyWard. Even sexier with the kid. It's so sweet and amazing. This story owns me.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7799137/1/Close-Your-Eyes

The Unexpected Benefits of List Making by hopey-wan-kenobi

Judul : The Unexpected Benefits of List Making
Author : hopey-wan-kenobi
Rate : M
Bab :  1 (Oneshot)
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :

Edward & Bella make a to-do list before heading off to college and help each other cross a few items off with surprising results.

Yeah, curiosity always win. The desire to make bestfriend's happy also win. This oneshot is all fun and hot. It's kind of cute, because Edward is a virgin. Oh yeahh lol

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5345008/1/The_Unexpected_Benefits_of_List_Making

Watching Her by les16

Judul : Watching Her
Author : les16
Rated : M
Bab : 50
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :

"She's his Drummer Girl. She plays. She dances. She's got secrets. He watches her. If he comes out of the woods will she let him in or close the doors forever?"

Edward loves to watch. in the middle of the night. Especially watching Bella. At first he ddidn't know a thing about her, the Drummer Girl. But somehow Edward braved himself to give a little gift for her. Then they exchanged notepad, told stories about themselves. And all he knows now he love her. One thing he wanted to do is save her and make her mine.
Ahhhh this is a beautiful fic. At first kinda boring because all we read is just the same, Edward watching Bella. But as the chapters came along, it made progress and it got more interesting. Bella with her own problem and Edward got nothing but his parent's love and bestfriend's supports. I didn't know how attractive Edward is until the last chapters. Ohh he is so hot, i believe Bella is lucky to make him hers *envy* LOL
And when those two meet in flesh, I cried. Such a sappy chapter.
Love this fic and the author just started the sequel ! Love it !!

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7956616/1/Watching_Her
sequel : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8158357/1/Drumsticks_and_Penalty_Kicks

Tempt My Tounge by savage7289

Judul : Tempt My Tounge
Author : savage7289
Rated : M
Bab : 10
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Edward, vampire peminum darah manusia, ingin melepas status perjakanya dengan gadis yang ia temui di bar atau pinggir jalan. Tapi sebelum keinginannya tercapai, taringnya yang tajam lebih dulu melukai gadis si korban dan Edward tak kuasa menolak darahnya yang segar. Hingga ia bertemu Bella, gadis belia yang membuat hidupnya jungkir balik tidak karuan. Edward merasa Bella adalah gadis yang tepat untuknya. Dengan bantuan Carlisle, Edward berusaha semakin dekat dengan Bella. Ia tidak ingin Bella terluka, ia juga posesif dan teramat protektif. Saking protektifnya, banyak nyawa tak berdosa yang harus melayang, baik dari golongan manusia, werewolf maupun vampire sendiri. Anehnya Bella tetap tidak takut dan justru makin penasaran dengan Edward.
Diceritakan dengan sudut pandang Edward, fanfic ini jauh lebih bagus daripada novel Twilight sendiri. Lebih "kelam" dan misterius. Alur cerita yang unik dan ending yang tak terduga, membuat cerita fanfic ini lebih menarik dan perasaan si pembaca menjadi campur aduk. Dibutuhkan keyakinan yang kuat untuk menyelesaikan 10 bab yang ada. Bagi yang sudah terbiasa dengan gaya menulis savage7289, tentu tidak kaget dengan cerita ini. Memang unik dan seru.
Good one :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7426742/1/Tempt_My_Tongue
 
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Good Deal by m7707

Judul : Good Deal
Author : m7707
Rated : M
Bab : 10
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Bella benci Rosalie. Mereka musuh bebuyutan. Bella ingin balas dendam atas perlakuan Rosalie selama ini. Kali ini, strategi yang Bella jalani adalah menggoda pacar Rosalie, Edward, cowok paling populer di sekolah, paling ganteng dan terbaik. Tidak tanggung-tanggung, Bella langsung melancarkan aksinya saat pertama kali berkenalan dengan Edward. Ternyata Edward tidak keberatan dengan motif Bella. Hingga akhirnya Bella dan Edward tidak sanggup lagi menyangkal isi hati mereka.
Phew, HOT ALERT, ladies ! Fast and hard and to the point :D Good story :)

A little part from chapter 4:

"So let me get this straight," he said a day or two later, holding me by my thighs, which were wrapped around his waist as he banged me against the wall in the stockroom at Newton's Sporting Goods. "Every time Rose pisses you off, you're going to fuck me?"
"Yep," I breathed, pushing back against him as he pounded into me. The boy had some serious strength and stamina. "Pretty much."
"Good deal," he gasped, burying his head in my neck.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7543244/1/Good_Deal

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A Compendium of Thoughts by ItIsRaining

Judul : A Compendium of Thoughts
Author : ItIsRaining
Rated : M
Bab : 10
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Edward menderita penyakit tumor. Setelah sempat dioperasi, gejalanya kambuh lagi hingga Edward tidak bisa menyetir kendaraan sendiri. Kondisi ini membuat ibu Edward, Esme, meminta bantuan ke pihak sekolah Edward untuk mencari solusi. Bella dan Angela adalah contoh murid teladan di sekolah, akhirnya diputuskan Bella untuk menjemput Edward ke sekolah setiap pagi dan Angela mendapat giliran saat pulang sekolah. Bella tidak pernah dekat dengan Edward sebelumnya, tapi tidak membuat Bella untuk acuh kepadanya. Bella sangat perhatian dengan kondisi kesehatan Edward. Lambat laun kesehatan Edward mulai membaik, tapi ada kalanya juga Edward harus terkulai lemas di rumah sakit. Naik turunnya kondisi ini membuat Bella tidak ingin melepas Edward. Namun orang tua Edward ternyata punya rencana lain yang tidak terduga.
Fanfic ini cukup singkat, walaupun agak sedih tapi berakhir bahagia. So sweet. Edward bukan berasal dari keluarga kaya raya bahkan Esme tidak pandai memasak! LOL

Link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6878388/1/A_Compendium_of_Thoughts
 
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So Be It by SophiaAnne

Judul : So Be It
Author : SophiaAnne
Rated : M
Bab : 5
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Edward adalah murid baru di Forks High. Bella ingin berkenalan dengannya tapi Edward sangat tertutup. Daripada frustasi, dia mendengarkan channel radio gelap yang sedang ngetrend di kalangan sekolahnya. Harry Hard, si penyiar, berhasil membius kaum muda Forks dengan gaya siarnya yang unik dan seksi hingga Bella pun penasaran siapakah sebenarnya dia ?
So be it. A crossover fanfiction of Twilight and Pump Up The Volume. Sangat lucu dan sederhana. Love this ! so much :D

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4843214/1/So_Be_It

100 Hours by wytchwmn

Judul : 100 Hours
Author : wytchwmn
Rated : M
Jumlah Bab : 21
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Bella adalah murid yang sangat pintar dan menjadi relawan di rumah sakit Forks. Edward, anak dokter Cullen, diharuskan untuk melayani masyarakat karena kenakalan yang dibuatnya. 100 jam harus dihabiskan Edward menjadi relawan di rumah sakit. Sebelum bertemu Bella, Edward sangat sok dan gaya. Ketika bertemu Bella, dia tidak bisa berbuat apa-apa karena Bella tidak mempan dirayu. Tetapi saat mereka telah menjadi pasangan kekasih, mereka tak terpisahkan.
Love this story. Lucu. Edward sangat sensitif dibalik badannya yang bertato dan bertindik, sedangkan Bella justru sangat kuat dan ternyata lumayan nakal. NaughtyBella and TattWard, hmm what a combination :D

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5947449/1/100_Hours

My Girl by suzie55

Judul : My Girl
Author : suzie55
Rated : M
Bab : 2
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review:
Bella bertemu dengan Edward, murid baru di sekolahnya. Walaupun Bella sudah punya pacar yang populer, tapi Edward tetap menyita perhatian dan pikirannya. Bella pun mulai tergoda. Di saat yang tepat, tempat yang tepat, Bella putus dengan Jacob dan memilih Edward. Bella meninggalkan popularitas yang ia dapat saat berkencan dengan Jacob, tapi ia tak peduli. Selama ia dapat terus bersama orang yang paling dicintainya, hingga ujung waktu.
So romantic ! Love this story. Edward yang rebel, selengekan, naik motor, tapi hatinya romantis dan lembut. It's like a dreamy guy. I believe that kind of guy does exist out there somewhere ;)
My fave part :

He takes off, jolting us both back from the power of the motor. As soon as we exit the drive-in, he pulls over and takes his helmet off. He jumps off the bike and fits it onto my head, securing the strap snuggly under my chin. He kisses me on the nose and says, "You look good in my helmet. You think you might want to wear it on a more regular basis?"
My heart sings, "Yes, I would definitely like to wear your helmet."
"So, you'll be my girl?"
"Uh-huh."

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6546721/1/My_Girl

Lovely Stalker...ish by CaraNo

Judul : Lovely Stalker...ish
Author : CaraNo
Rated : M
Bab : 1 (oneshot)
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :

He's obsessed with her. It's mutual. Of course they'll work it out together. They were made for each other, for fuck's sake. Both equally nuts and devoted.

Ha ! Love this oneshot, love the author too. Sweet and quick and hot !

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6846471/9/Collection

The Wish by earthprincess4

Judul : The Wish
Author : earthprincess4
Rated : M
Bab : 1 (oneshot)
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Bella, single, 36 tahun, seorang ahli astronomi. Kurang beruntung dalam hal cinta. Suatu malam, Bella melihat bintang jatuh, secara tidak sadar dia mengucap keinginan agar seseorang jatuh cinta kepadanya. Keesokan pagi, dia terbangun dengan sosok menawa di sampingnya. Edward, adalah bintang yang berwujud manusia dan dikirim untuk mewujudkan permintaan Bella. Dalam satu minggu, Bella harus mendapatkan keinginannya agar Edward dapat kembali pulang. Hari-hari Bella diawali dengan make-over. Edward juga mengatur blind-date untuk Bella setiap malam, tapi semuanya tidak berakhir memuaskan. Bella frustasi, hari kepergian Edward semakin dekat, dia tidak ingin Edward gagal dengan misinya, tapi dia juga belum menemukan cinta sejatinya.
Lumayan lucu dan konyol, tapi bagus. Edward membeberkan beberapa tips agar wanita lebih menarik di mata pria.

"Sweetheart, you can't make a man feel inferior to you if you want to keep him around for a while. You got to let him think he's in control and he can dazzle you for a while. Once he's fallen in love with you, he should be able to accept what you do and not think about how much better than him you are. He won't care. Be a little mysterious at first."

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6633633/1/The_Wish

Golden Boy by stella luna sky

Judul : Golden Boy
Author : stella luna sky
Rated : M
Bab : 1 (oneshot)
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :

The first time I saw him, he was the defeated quarterback of my school's rival team. I'm still not sure why I talked to him, but I know it's the smartest thing I've ever done.

Another happy ending and sweet story. Just love it :) Cute.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7455164/1/Golden_Boy

Decoy by 107yearoldvirgin

Judul : Decoy
Author : 107yearoldvirgin
Rated : M
Bab : 20
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :

A deal that will change their lives: Bella Swan is tired of being a nobody and makes a deal with one of the most popular guys in high school, Edward Cullen, to help her break into the "cool" clique. But is she who he thinks she is?

Fanfic ini bercerita tentang kehidupan Bella dan keinginannya untuk tetap diingat oleh teman-teman masa kecilnya, termasuk cinta pertamanya, Edward. Saat haru pindah kembali ke kota asalnya setelah sekian tahun pergi, Bella merasa dilema. Teman-teman yang ia kenal dulu telah tumbuh menjadi remaja dan tidak lagi mengenalnya. Bella menjadi sosok yang tertutup, padahal di tahun terakhir SMA, dia ingin bersenang-senang dengan teman-temannya. Edward, sahabat Bella saat kecil, tumbuh menjadi sosok yang populer, bersama gank-nya, Rosalie, Emmet, Alice dan Jasper, mereka menguasai sekolah. Hingga suatu saat, Edward terjerat suatu masalah, kemudian datanglah Bella sebagai penolong. Bella merasa ini adalah saat yang tepat untuk melancarkan misi agar diingat kembali oleh teman-temannya, termasuk mendapatkan kembali sahabatnya. Bella pun membuat perjanjian dengan Edward. Perjanjian sepihak itu memang menyudutkan Edward, tapi dia tetap menjalaninya dan ternyata Bella mampu mencuri hati Edward. Semua menjadi kacau menjelang akhir periode perjanjian mereka. Bella frustasi tidak ingin kehilangan Edward, sedangkan Edward ingin bersikap gentleman tapi justru membuat keadaan semakin buruk. Akankah Bella berhasil dengan misinya ?
A different and unique highschoolfic. Good story, good plot. Memang masa-masa SMA adalah masa-masa paling repot dan ribet dan penuh kenangan. Rasanya, kita tidak akan tahan jika tidak menjadi yang populer di sekolah. Memang Bella tidak berniat untuk menjadi populer, tapi itu adalah konsekuensi jika dekat dengan seorang Edward Cullen. Dan popularitas tidak sepenuhnya membawa kebahagiaan (menurut saya).
Thx @doDazzle for the rec ;)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7385364/1/Decoy

Scotch, Gin, and The New Girl by wtvoc

Judul : Scotch, Gin, and The New Girl
Author : wtvoc
Rated : M
Bab : 21
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Fanfic ini bercerita tentang kehidupan remaja di SMA. Bella murid baru dan Edward playboy, sama-sama menerima tantangan yang diberikan oleh Rosalie. Bella harus bisa untuk tidak jatuh ke dalam rayuan Edward, sedangkan Edward ditantang harus bisa mendapatkan Bella. Awalnya mereka merasa yakin mampu melakukannya, tapi setelah perasaan cinta ikut dipertaruhkan, mereka menjadi kacau. Edward tidak ingin reputasinya hancur dihadapan teman-temannya karena kalah bertaruh, walaupun Bella telah memberikan semuanya.
Ceritanya tidak sesederhana highschool-fic pada umumnya. Saya lumayan enjoy membaca fanfic ini :)
Nice fic !

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4561940/1/Scotch_Gin_and_the_New_Girl