The Diner by jessypt

Title : The Diner

Author : jessypt

Rated : M

Chapters : 26

Status : Complete

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Bella is a baker with a rough past, looking for a new start. Edward is a chef trying to get his life back on track. What happens when things heat up in the kitchen at The Diner?

Review :

This fic is simply classic. With all the simple angst, I said simple because recently the form of angst is getTing heavier day by day, seriously. It’s about Bella who tried to runaway from her crazy ex-husband (or so she thought). She cameback to Forks, her hometown and lived with Charlie. Bella loves to bake and that’s what she does when she got a job at the local diner, The Diner. Besides waitressing, she made cupcakes. The only problem is the chef. Yes, Edward the chef. He is so grumpy about his kitchen, even Bella has to take his grumpiness. So as Edward and Bella slowly become closer, they learn about each other and deeply care. They both know that each other has issues but afraid to push it. When the storm really comes to their relationship, Edward and Bella realize that they have to handle their issues first if they want to move on in their relationship.

Yes, simply sweet and hot. Yes it has angst but I’m sure it’s not a big deal. It’s classic and well written. This story has been waiting patiently in my to-be-read list for almost two years lol. By the way, this ChefWard is hot and sexy and he can cook. Isn't it amazing ? Imagine waking up in the morning with the breakfast ready, must be heaven :))

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5709380/1/The-Diner

Cutlass by TKegl

Title : Cutlass

Author : TKegl

Rated : M

Chapters : 26

Status : Complete

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Isabella Swan is certain notorious pirate, Edward Cullen, murdered her father and stole his prized cutlass. Out for revenge, she sneaks onto his ship, but Captain Cullen claims she has the wrong man. A tale of the search for truth…and treasure of course.

Review : 

Cutlass is one of my favorite fic. The story is about Bella who’s trying to take a revenge to One Eyed Eddie for the death of her father. Little did she know anything about her father. So when Bella join Edward as his crew in “The Arrow”, she has to pretend as a boy. When the chance comes, Bella fails to fulfill her wish and she ends up to reveal her identity as a girl. But Edward takes no prisoner, he knows the truth about Bella’s father. So both Edward and Bella share a history to revenge to the same man that make their life misery. A prite is not a pirate if not in a treasure hunting. So the only way they can revenge is beat that man in treasure hunting. Of course, Bella and Edward need to work as a team and it’s not easy. Because both are stubborn and secretly attracted to each other :D This story is beautifully well written. The words made me enjoy reading it, follow the journey to the treasure. Not too lemony, so when Edward kiss Bella, it really is something big :D Beautiful fic, amazing story with amazing ending. Read it :) 

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7792629/1/Cutlass

An Undefined Affair by jayhawkbb

Tittle : An Undefined Affair

Author : jayhawkbb

Rated : M

Status : Complete

Chapters : 27

Pairing : E/B

Summary :

Bella, recovering from a broken heart, meets Edward, who isolates himself emotionally. Their attraction is immediate, but can they be friends and lovers - without the love? BxE, all the regs, some drama, some funny, lemony, language AH

Review :

The story begins when Bella, representating her workplace in a client meeting with the one and only Edward. Their first encounter is very interesting, funny and unexpected. A meeting in the office is not enough for both of them, so the “work meeting” continues in a bar and they ended up in Bella’s place. One thing lead to another. Bella doesn’t want a relationship, neither does Edward. They both want no string attached. So there they go, spend their times together, every chance they got, every night, in a work circumstances, there’s nothing impossible for them. Jasper and Emmett, Bella’s boss and bestfriends, remind her about her issue about commitment. At first Bella still can manage her heart, but when she feels her feeling grew more than just a friend, she decides to tell Edward. Edward also afraid of commitment, so when Bella just drop the L-bomb, he reacts so badly. He just doesn’t realize yet that he also love her.

Before you read the hot hot lemon, you must survive the prologue first J

One word for this fic : AMAZING. It’s hot, it’s a little bit angsty, it’s drama, it’s sexy and it’s kinda funny and super wellwritten. Hot, because Edward can give 13 orgasms to Bella just in 12 hours. Oh yes I’m becoming too vulgar here LOL. Bella character in this story is so fun, easy going and smart. I like it. Edward is also smart and hot. Jasper, I love him here, he’s so protective of Bella.

So, if you interested, click the link and read. I love this fic so much. Oh and one more thing, to accompany reading the story, you can listen to the song “Fixing A Broken Heart”. Really it suits the story, like Edward and Bella were made for each other, to heal the broken heart from the past.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6009627/1/An-Undefined-Affair

Fatty by kitkat681

Title : Fatty

Author : kitkat681

Rated : M

Chapter : 33

Status : Completed

Pairing : E/B

Summary:

Edward Cullen can't find something that's very important to him...his wang. But that's what happens when you are 363 pounds. Bella Swan is his only chance to live a real life and find what's missing and so much more.

Review :

Edward is fat and he wants to get in shape. He's tired of the joke on him. So he came to the gym and got help from personal trainer, Bella. At first, Edward really underestimated himself but Bella didn't let it happen. Bella sees Edward more than just throuh the scale. Within months, Edward shows progress, so does the progress of his feeling toward Bella. He can't deny that she has captured his heart. Edward also realized that Bella is the motivation so far.

Seems like easy fic, but truly this story is so deep. It tells about insecurities that happen to most of people who's not sexy, not slim, not in average shape, not fit in (like Bella said). This story teaches us that happiness is in the heart. In this story, Bella didn't come sexy, she was indeed fat once. She felt those insecurities. Even at the moment she got the shape she craved, she still feels that. So does Edward.

All those heavy stuff unfolded in a humor words, easy and well written. Love this fic. So beautiful.

The quote I like : 

I may always be a fatty.

But I'm happy, healthy and surrounded by people I love. 

And in the end…that's all that matters.

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7698232/1/Fatty