Thursday, July 19, 2012

Practice to Deceive by Livie79

Judul : Practice to Deceive
Author : Livie79
Rated : M
Bab : 28
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"I saw her today. I wasn't impressed. But he wanted her, and that was enough for me. She was just collateral damage."
This fic is about Edward, who just love Bella but started it with a wrong way. Edward made Bella as a target for his revenge to his bestfriend, Jacob. Edward thought Bella as Jacob's new girlfriend. But he's wrong. Bella is not that easy. When first they met, Edward, cocky and confident, tried to make Bella fall for him. Bella didn't buy crap, so Edward tried harder but Bella never give her full attention. It's a long way that they are finally together and Edward still keep his original intention toward Bella. Edward realizes he already change that intention but he never got the courage to tell Bella. And all break lose when Bella finds out.
This story is so good. Not too lemony but the storyline itself can give the goodies no less. Edward here is hot and Bella is fiesty. So the sexual tension is fun. Edward wrote a journal, there's a reason for it, and that's the problem comes from.
I love this fic and it's HEA :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7699988/1/

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Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Dear Veronica by cosmogirl7481

Judul : Dear Veronica
Author : cosmogirl7481
Rated : M
Bab : 41
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"1994 was the year that The Cranberries lingered on our radios and Jordan Catalano was still the hottest boy we could imagine. But it was also the year that Bella Swan decided to keep a diary. A record of her actions. A place to share her thoughts."
So, Bella named her diary Veronica. She shared everything, her twin brother Emmett, her daily activities, in school and the diner where she works, how her feelings day by day, including her crush, Edward. Bella wanted to date him, but Emmett and her father, Charlie, didn't like the idea. Bella just wanted to be normal just like any other highschool girl, but apparently she had to be smart to get what she wants. Maybe break one rule or two.
This story is so beautiful, well written as always from cosmo. A very sappy and beautiful happy ending, this fic reminds me of my old times diary. I don't think teenage girls right now have one. The setting is 1994, it's quite a long time ago but I can still imagine the fashion style that cosmo described in this story. Oh and this fic gave me something to listen to everynight before go to sleep, it's Mazzy Star's song "Fade Into You". It's a beautiful song :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8183892/1/
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Shamrocks and Shenanigans by mathisson

Judul : Shamrocks and Shenanigans
Author : mathisson
Rated : M
Bab: 30
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review:
"Bella is working for a catering and event planning company. She has just about pulled off the reception of the year when she's introduced to Edward Cullen, mafia boss. Can he show her that even bad guys can be good."
Mostly told from Bella's point of view, this story is about mob world. Bella, a good girl, working in an event organizer, never realized that anyone surrounds her is involved in mafia world. First, her sister, then her father who happen to be the chief of police. When Bella is working in one of the most expensive wedding ever (in her mind), she met Edward. Bella doesn't know how powerful Edward is, and one thing she doesn't understand, he called her Legs.
Phew..what should I write? LOL this fic has it all, the lemon, the drama, the romance and a bit of fluff, even violence, drug use and crime things. If you like mobWard, you will love this story. :)

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7965930/1/
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Penal Code by BellaFlan

Judul : Penal Code
Author : BellaFlan
Rated : M
Bab : 10
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
"Undercover Cop Edward Cullen wants some excitement on his beat. Bella, whom he mistakenly thinks is a hooker, desperately needs to snap out of her funk. How deep is Edward willing to go undercover to get the girl?"
Edward is an undercover cop. One night, he really really wants to catch a hooker. So there he is, trying to "make a deal" with a hooker ( or he thought look like a hooker ). Only he doesn't know, that Bella (supposed-to-be-a-hooker) is one important person in his office. Things get more awkward when Alice comes in as Bella's bestfriend and Edward's sister. Also when Bella's father found out about this situation. Edward has nothing to do to save his job and life, except his love for Bella.
LOL such a hopeless romantic, but Edward is, hopeless and romantic, stupid but brave, fortunately he is a handsome cop. Bella is one brave woman, very cool and doesn't take anyman's bullshit easily, including Edward.
A collaboration of BellaFlan and FictionFreak95, this fic has a funny story, hot lemon and pudding. I don't know why they choose pudding, but because of this story, I never look at pudding the same again LOL :D

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7706072/1/
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Catch My Breath by tanglingshadows

Judul : Catch My Breath
Author : tanglingshadows
Rated : M
Bab : 11
Tamat : Sudah
Cast : E/B

Review :
Once upon a time, a quirky woman barreled into a soft-spoken man's life and turned it upside down. Not that he complained about it...
Edward is a cop. A good and nice cop. But he can't deny the attraction between him and Bella. After one time at night, Edward can't get Bella out of his mind. He feels rejected but loved at the same time. He wants to date Bella but has no idea how. Bella is 8 younger that him and she is his boss's daughter. Yes, that's the problem. But Bella doesn't see it as a problem :D
This story is short but all fun. I enjoyed every chapter. A cute happy ending. Love it!

Link : http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8227043/1/

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